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Sitting Beside You
by Chris H. "The Grim Spectre" a.k.a. "Heart Flame"


I sit beside you,
Waiting for you to come,
I sit beside you,
Believing you are the one,

You sit beside me,
Waiting for my reply,
You sit beside me,
Staring me straight in the eye,

One day you might come,
Will I be ready?
One day I might reply,
Will you be steady?

Is this the sum of our fears,
Or the summit of our anticipations?
Should we be fearful of it,
Or warmly show our acceptance?

We sit beside each other,
Anticipating the end,
We sit beside each other,
But we sit beside ourselves.
©2007-2009 ~TheGrimSpectre
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Author's Comments

OK... I think I have this in the right category... dunno... I don't have much experience writing poetry.
Please let me know what you think! : D Can you figure out what I was talking about? It may not be so obvious... of course most answers are usually right under your nose... :3
This poem is © to me, ty.

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:iconhomicidusinfirmorum:
AWESOMENESS! I love it! How long did it take yuo to write it? :+fav:

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Killer of the Weak (so evil!)
"'War is a bad thing, but peace can be a living horror.'" -Ray Bradbury's Illustrated Man
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -:groucho:
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It only took a few mins to write, but a few months for it to come to me, I based it off of an event in my life.

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oh.

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HomicidusInfirmorum
Killer of the Weak (so evil!)
"'War is a bad thing, but peace can be a living horror.'" -Ray Bradbury's Illustrated Man
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -:groucho:
:iconhomicidusinfirmorum:
oh.

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HomicidusInfirmorum
Killer of the Weak (so evil!)
"'War is a bad thing, but peace can be a living horror.'" -Ray Bradbury's Illustrated Man
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -:groucho:
:iconthegrimspectre:
and what is strange is that the person that i based this on figured it out right after reading it!@#%

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:iconhomicidusinfirmorum:
This being who again...? Dannie?

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Killer of the Weak (so evil!)
"'War is a bad thing, but peace can be a living horror.'" -Ray Bradbury's Illustrated Man
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -:groucho:
:iconthegrimspectre:
yepz

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arg, figures

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Killer of the Weak (so evil!)
"'War is a bad thing, but peace can be a living horror.'" -Ray Bradbury's Illustrated Man
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -:groucho:
:iconthegrimspectre:
arg?

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